Arts and Social Science conclusions
Theme: Suppression of women in Ancient Greek society
This student has an effective combination of facts about his subject coupled with his perspective on the matter. Although we cannot see his essay in full, we can assume that if the quality of the whole essay matches the quality of the conclusion as presented here, it would have done very well (and in fact it did; he was awarded an A for this assignment).
Look out for the features of this conclusion that portray this student's perspective. Note that he does not need to use any first-person language to reveal his voice.
- First, use the buttons on the right to guide you through the lesson. Read the excerpt and look at the notes provided.
- Complete the short activity.
- Finally, feel welcome to contact Student Learning either personally, or via the Moodle writing forum to discuss your writing (University of Waikato students only).