The University of Waikato - Te Whare Wānanga o Waikato
Student Learning
Waikato Home Waikato Home > Student LearningAcademic Texts > Education excerpts
Staff + Student Login

Education conclusions

Theme: Physical activity

Task: Define physical activity and discuss its role in maintaining health and wellbeing. From a 100 level Sports and Leisure studies paper 1500 words.)
About this excerpt:

The elements of a conclusion
Watch Shaun Mcleod from Smrt English (new tab) providing advice on how to write various elements of an essay in his Youtube video basic essay structure (new tab).
Challenge: Compare this conclusion here with the advice about conclusions that Shaun offers. Decide how closely this student's conclusion structure matches.
This student also has given us permission for you access to the whole essay (for which we are very grateful). In the activity there are some items that we hope will encourage you to notice some of the other features that contribute to the quality of this essay.

What to do
  • First, use the buttons on the right to guide you through the lesson. Read the excerpt and look at the notes provided.
  • Read the whole essay
  • Complete the short activity (button above to the right).
  • Finally, feel welcome to contact Student Learning either personally, or via the Moodle writing forum to discuss your writing (University of Waikato students only).