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Background: This is an education assignment in which the students are expected to make a connection between the Treaty of Waitangi - Te Tiriti o Waitangi - and the influence of social history on curriculum development in Aotearoa New Zealand.
King, M. (2003). The Penguin history of New Zealand. Auckland, New Zealand: Penguin.
Ministry of Education. (2007). The New Zealand curriculum for English-medium teaching and learning in years 1-13. Wellington, New Zealand: Learning Media.
Orange, C. (2011). The Treaty of Waitangi. Wellington, New Zealand: Bridget Williams.
Sorrenson, M. P. K. (1981). Maori and Pakeha. In W.H. Oliver & B.R. Williams (Eds.). The Oxford history of New Zealand (pp. 168-193). Wellington, New Zealand: Clarendon.
Walker, R. (1991). Liberating Maori from educational subjection (Monograph No. 6). Auckland, New Zealand: The International Research Institute for Maori and Indigenous Education, The University of Auckland.